Creation has been accepted by MacQueen’s Quinterly.
Reading 2018 (partial)
| 2018/04/25 | Ka: Dar Oakley in the Ruin of Ymr | John Crowley |
| 2018/04/14 | The Book of Esther | Emily Barton |
| 2018/04/14 | Body | Harry Crews |
| 2018/04/09 | Crossing to Safety | Wallace Stegner |
| 2018/02/21 | Gaudy Night (Lord Peter Wimsey, #12) | Dorothy L. Sayers |
| 2018/02/08 | What Weaponry | Elizabeth J. Colen |
| 2018/02/05 | Those Who Leave and Those Who Stay (The Neapolitan Novels, #3) | Elena Ferrante |
| 2018/01/17 | The Poetry Home Repair Manual: Practical Advice for Beginning Poets | Ted Kooser |
Forging Warmth
Forging Warmth has been accepted for publication by The Citron Review.
The Pastor and His Dark Church
The Pastor and His Dark Church was published by Microfiction Monday Magazine in August of 2018.
Thickening
Not long ago I finished a draft of a novel. It felt thin in spots. It’s hard to describe perfectly, but rereading it, I found myself thinking, “There should be more there” about some pages and scenes. In some cases, I’d written dialogue but it wasn’t revealing a character’s thoughts. Or, the dialogue lacked context in the form of setting or actions that the characters took while they were speaking. The draft was also shorter than I wanted it to be. It was under 50,000 words.
I decided that the main goal of the next draft would be to address both the thin spots and the length. Happy with the plot, adding a subplot or another character seemed like a bad idea. Instead, I think I was influenced by the Oulipo group’s larding exercise.
If you’re facing similar concerns with a complete draft of yours, try this:
- Determine the number of words you’d like your final draft to be. This number is your goal.
- Subtract the number of words of your current draft from that goal. This is the number of words you lack.
- Divide that lack by the current number of pages of your draft. The resulting number is your target number.
- Read through the draft again. Add—in some way that helps your draft—your target number in words to each page.
For example, let’s say you’d like a draft to be 50,000, but it is currently 45,000. The difference between those numbers is 5,000. Your 45,000-word draft is 85 single-spaced pages. Divide 5,000 by 85 and you need to add about 59 words to each page to reach your goal.
The crucial thing is finding ways to add those sixty words that help the draft. For example, I reviewed ways of making setting interesting and my characters’ backstories before I started. The words I added improved characterization and setting as a result.
Vonnegut’s tips
- Use the time of a total stranger in such a way that he or she will not feel the time was wasted.
- Give the reader at least one character he or she can root for.
- Every character should want something, even if it is only a glass of water.
- Every sentence must do one of two things — reveal character or advance the action.
- Start as close to the end as possible.
- Be a sadist. No matter how sweet and innocent your leading characters, make awful things happen to them–in order that the reader may see what they are made of.
- Write to please just one person. If you open a window and make love to the world, so to speak, your story will get pneumonia.
- Give your readers as much information as possible as soon as possible. To heck with suspense. Readers should have such complete understanding of what is going on, where and why, that they could finish the story themselves, should cockroaches eat the last few pages.
Epistemological storytelling
There’s something epistemological about storytelling. It’s the way we know each other, the way we know ourselves, the way we know the world. It’s also the way we don’t know: the way the world is kept from us, the way we’re kept from knowledge about ourselves, the way we’re kept from understanding other people.
–Andrea Barrett
Rained upon
Good writing is supposed to evoke sensation in the reader—not the fact that it’s raining, but the feel of being rained upon.
–E.L. Doctorow
Margot Livesey’s “How to Tell a True Story”
What are differences between writing a personal essay and fiction? Charles Baxter and Peter Turchi’s Bringing the Devil to His Knees includes Margot Livesey’s essay, which addresses this question.
Donald Barthelme’s “Not-knowing”
How much do you need to plan a short story before you begin writing it? Consider Donald Barthelme’s essay “Not-knowing.”