Reading 2020

2020/11/26Nothing to See HereKevin    Wilson
2020/11/22The Godwulf Manuscript (Spenser, #1)Robert B. Parker
2020/11/15EileenOttessa Moshfegh
2020/11/14A Memory Called Empire (Teixcalaan, #1)Arkady Martine
2020/10/25The Glass HotelEmily St. John Mandel
2020/10/15Deacon King KongJames   McBride
2020/09/29Lovecraft Country (Lovecraft Country, #1)Matt Ruff
2020/09/15Artificial Condition (The Murderbot Diaries, #2)Martha Wells
2020/09/10Meander, Spiral, Explode: Design and Pattern in NarrativeJane Alison
2020/09/06Mandelbrot the MagnificentLiz Ziemska
2020/09/03The Merry Spinster: Tales of Everyday HorrorDaniel M. Lavery
2020/08/28Harrow the Ninth (The Locked Tomb, #2)Tamsyn Muir
2020/08/03The Raven TowerAnn Leckie
2020/07/29White Fragility: Why It’s So Hard for White People to Talk About RacismRobin DiAngelo
2020/07/17WeatherJenny Offill
2020/07/12The Ten Thousand Doors of JanuaryAlix E. Harrow
2020/06/18Between the World and MeTa-Nehisi Coates
2020/06/09FloridaLauren Groff
2020/05/26Her Body and Other PartiesCarmen Maria Machado
2020/05/05All Systems Red (The Murderbot Diaries, #1)Martha Wells
2020/05/05Gideon the Ninth (The Locked Tomb, #1)Tamsyn Muir
2020/04/21These Truths: A History of the United StatesJill Lepore
2020/04/14Jennifer GovernmentMax Barry

Reading 2018 (partial)

2018/04/25Ka: Dar Oakley in the Ruin of YmrJohn Crowley
2018/04/14The Book of EstherEmily   Barton
2018/04/14BodyHarry Crews
2018/04/09Crossing to SafetyWallace Stegner
2018/02/21Gaudy Night (Lord Peter Wimsey, #12)Dorothy L. Sayers
2018/02/08What WeaponryElizabeth J. Colen
2018/02/05Those Who Leave and Those Who Stay (The Neapolitan Novels, #3)Elena Ferrante
2018/01/17The Poetry Home Repair Manual: Practical Advice for Beginning PoetsTed Kooser

Thickening

Not long ago I finished a draft of a novel. It felt thin in spots. It’s hard to describe perfectly, but rereading it, I found myself thinking, “There should be more there” about some pages and scenes. In some cases, I’d written dialogue but it wasn’t revealing a character’s thoughts. Or, the dialogue lacked context in the form of setting or actions that the characters took while they were speaking. The draft was also shorter than I wanted it to be. It was under 50,000 words.

I decided that the main goal of the next draft would be to address both the thin spots and the length. Happy with the plot, adding a subplot or another character seemed like a bad idea. Instead, I think I was influenced by the Oulipo group’s larding exercise.

If you’re facing similar concerns with a complete draft of yours, try this:

  1. Determine the number of words you’d like your final draft to be. This number is your goal.
  2. Subtract the number of words of your current draft from that goal. This is the number of words you lack.
  3. Divide that lack by the current number of pages of your draft. The resulting number is your target number.
  4. Read through the draft again. Add—in some way that helps your draft—your target number in words to each page.

For example, let’s say you’d like a draft to be 50,000, but it is currently 45,000. The difference between those numbers is 5,000. Your 45,000-word draft is 85 single-spaced pages. Divide 5,000 by 85 and you need to add about 59 words to each page to reach your goal.

The crucial thing is finding ways to add those sixty words that help the draft. For example, I reviewed ways of making setting interesting and my characters’ backstories before I started. The words I added improved characterization and setting as a result.

Vonnegut’s tips

  1. Use the time of a total stranger in such a way that he or she will not feel the time was wasted.
  2. Give the reader at least one character he or she can root for.
  3. Every character should want something, even if it is only a glass of water.
  4. Every sentence must do one of two things — reveal character or advance the action.
  5. Start as close to the end as possible.
  6. Be a sadist. No matter how sweet and innocent your leading characters, make awful things happen to them–in order that the reader may see what they are made of.
  7. Write to please just one person. If you open a window and make love to the world, so to speak, your story will get pneumonia.
  8. Give your readers as much information as possible as soon as possible. To heck with suspense. Readers should have such complete understanding of what is going on, where and why, that they could finish the story themselves, should cockroaches eat the last few pages.

Epistemological storytelling

There’s something epistemological about storytelling. It’s the way we know each other, the way we know ourselves, the way we know the world. It’s also the way we don’t know: the way the world is kept from us, the way we’re kept from knowledge about ourselves, the way we’re kept from understanding other people.

–Andrea Barrett